Creative Stuff - Nonsense Rhyme

Monday, December 27, 2004

The Dress and The Iron

The Dress lay crumpled on the ground
It was deeply depressed
"I'm so wrinkled all over,
I've lost my youthful zest!
Oh! I look a complete wreck!"
It tearfully confessed.

"Nonsense," growled the stiff Iron
Perched up on the board.
"You look quite fetching actually -
I'll put it on record.
From the very day we met,
It's you that I've adored!"

The Dress could not believe its ears
It blushed red to its roots
It felt so light with happiness
Up to the board it flew
It quivered with excitement -
The Iron felt it too.

As the Iron kissed the Dress,
it felt real warm inside
Tracing every contour,
smoothly it did glide
Heating up and spewing steam,
smoothly did it slide

Catching every little fold
Smoothing every crease
Warm sometimes and hot sometimes,
the Iron did so tease!
And when the Iron was all done,
The Dress was very pleased.

The Dress felt young all o'er again,
The wrinkles were all gone!
It danced away impatiently,
Leaving the Iron alone
Cold and lonely, on the board
The Iron stood, forlorn.

Every day the Iron waits
For the wrinkled Dress
It's always there to reassure
the Dress, when it's depressed.
A fleeting love affair with one,
it can never possess.

10 Comments:

  • At 4:27 AM, Blogger asuph said…

    ano!

    Nonsense rhyme? Nonsense!
    What's sense got to do with it?

    -asuph.

     
  • At 7:24 AM, Blogger void said…

    terrific stuff, ano.. simple, yet evocative.. you wouldnt know this, but i ve been reading all your blogs over the holidays and secretly admiring your amazing writing skills :)

     
  • At 7:47 AM, Blogger CogitoErgoConfusum said…

    whoo! i dunno about the iron, but that was one hot poem! my dirty mind bows to yours...:D

     
  • At 8:39 AM, Blogger thoughtraker said…

    i typed out a loooong response to all ur comments and lost it :((
    so, will make do with this message...
    thanks guyz!! glad u all enjoyed the pome!

    :D

     
  • At 10:45 AM, Blogger Reshmi said…

    verry cute!! :-D
    the act of ironing will never be the same again :-P

     
  • At 8:52 AM, Blogger DilettanteMoi said…

    then it was the escapades of the soap and the shampoo, later the playfulness of the wind and the cloud.. now romance between an iron and a dress!! :D

    looking forward to more nonsense..

     
  • At 8:28 PM, Blogger bottled-imp said…

    i came in late, very late but then when does coming in late ever stop a comment?

    this is my kind of poetry!!! i loved it.

     
  • At 10:27 AM, Blogger thoughtraker said…

    thanks again resh, funny, imp!

     
  • At 6:04 AM, Blogger Paddy said…

    Lovely, beautiful stuff! I'm linking to your blog.

     
  • At 7:13 AM, Blogger Dr. Sherline Pimenta K. said…

    hey ! nice one :)

     

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